
Soha Samla is really good at reading. She's good at writing, too, but wasn't ecstatic about her score on the writing section of the Florida Comprehensive Assessment Test. When she learned last week she had won second place in a county-wide essay contest, she said, “I was totally surprised.”
It’s the fifth year the Broward Sheriff’s Office has conducted an essay contest during Arson Awareness Week, May 3 through 9.
Co-sponsored by the Florida State Fire Marshal’s office, the contest is an effort to teach students the danger of fire and especially arson. This year’s competition drew 331 essays. Quiet Waters Elementary School was the only school to participate in North Broward County. Students there landed six awards with essays focusing on teenage arson.
There are many reasons the BSO and fire marshals want kids, especially, to be arson averse. For starters, arson is a crime. It is any crime in which someone intentionally sets fire to a building that could be inhabited by people. A 2009 study by the National Social Science Association found that “the vast majority of fire-setters were males, Caucasian, younger in age, more typically playing with matches, living with a single parent and setting a fire in one location in side of the house.”
In Britain, among other places, the focus has been on the need to be pro-active in fighting arson.
Accordingly, the writing prompt describes a 14-year-old girl who is taken to a juvenile detention facility after starting a fire in her backpack. Students were instructed to, “Write to persuade Ashley not to commit the crime of arson again.” Soha’s winning submission began with enough some solid research to spice it up.
“I wanted to know how long you could stay in juvie,” she explained of how she decided to make a juvenile detention facility the focus of her essay. “l found out it was five years to life on Wikianswers.com.”
Soha’s essay pointed out that getting caught. “...would mean having to stay with next generation criminals…you could not see your family, friends or pets…(and) you can be there for five years to even your whole life.
“Here is the big one,” she continued. “Many innocent people can get hurt or killed and it would be all your fault….Think of all the parents and brothers and sisters waiting for their child or sibling to come home…"
Soha’s own parent – her Mom, Salma Abdullah – was on hand for the celebration, as the six winners shared a sheet cake. Soha’s prose won her Wal-Mart and McDonald’s gift certificates, as well as four Miami Seaquarium tickets. Putting the certificate in a frame will be will be a thrill, she said, but not the best part.
“That was finding out that I won,” she said.
BOX:Arson Awareness
3rd place – Genae Dambra from Ms. Somers 4th grade class
2nd place – Natalia Galicza from Mrs. Kostrzecha’s 3rd grade class
1st place – Soha Samla from Mrs. Pinzon’s 5th grade class
Soha also placed 2nd for the entire county
Honoree mentions
5th grade – Gabby Esposito from Mrs. Pinzon
5th grade – Mazden Bindel from Mrs. Pinzon
3rd grade – Samantha Kirby from Mrs. Kostrzecha
Soha Samla's Essay:
"Dear Ashley Embers,
I wonder why you lit a fire in your backpack. When I read the article, I just wondered if you realized all the things that could happen. All the consequences you have to face for doing that. You can get set to juvenile detention, get expelled, and most of all, many innocent people could hvae gotten hurt and it would be your entire fault.
Going to juvenile detention would mean having to stay with next generation criminals. Also,you could not see your family, friends or even your pets. Nothing is fun about juvenile detention. Doing arson would give you a lot of time in jail when you get olders. You can be there for five years to even your whole life! That is a bad consequence and I'm sure of it.
Getting expelled would mean getting left behind in school and not seeing your friends or teachers. You would be known as 'The Arsonist' of something terrible. Also, if you don't have real friends, they may betray you because they are afraid you might endanger their family and their own life. You may end up with no friends at all. If other schools hear about your incident, you may not have a chance of getting in. Doing a crime can ruin your whole life.
Here is the big one. Many innocent people can get hurt or killed and it would be all your fault. Think about it. Thing of all the parents and brothers and sisters waiting for their child or their sibling to come home and find out they have died in an arson incident. or maybe, some kids get paralyzed and have to sit in a wheelchair, not being able to move for the rest of their life. That may not be important to you,but, what if it was the opposite way? You would regret that all the rest of your life. I know I would.
Whatever the reason was that made you start the fire, talk to someone about it. You don't want to give your school and family a bad name, now, do you? Please don't do it again. it's bad for everyone. Signed, Soha Samla.
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